| The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 | |
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Is this story better than aun tarctics dissapearence | Yes | | 100% | [ 4 ] | No | | 0% | [ 0 ] | Dont know | | 0% | [ 0 ] | Maybe | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Thu Apr 09, 2009 12:49 pm | |
| The case of the stolen key part 2 of 2 “So who did it? Who STOLE the key” Billybob insisted, “We don’t know yet our sources aren’t up to date” G replied. The two penguins hid the key in the one place no one would look......Behind the ski hill sign.Everyone was looking hard they thought it wouldn’t be in a simple place like stuck to the back of the sign with some sticky tape. They were looking in the pool, on the extreme track, the ninja room, The plaza, The night club and lots lots more including ski hill! “This is frank drawler reporting for Club Penguin Channel 5 news, It seems that someone or something has taken the secret key that can access the anniversary party in the dojo, without it you can’t get in” Reported the news reporter, “Gary do we have any leads” The news reporter asked, “Not at this time, its early in the investigation” Gary replied, “Will you be able to catch the suspects befor........” The news reporter hadn’t had time to finish his question when G’s spy phone rang.........“Hello agent G, we have the key to the anniversary party....” The penguin on the phone said, “Where is the key” G said about three times, “Ahhhh a bit of jump into the fire, You see G I am not going to tell you where the key is, I’m not like that idiot Herbert.P.Bear I Know what I’m doing, Remember the Aunt Arctic case.. You know when she disappeared, you thought you found the culprits, you caught mostly all of us, G I plotted that kidnapping” The penguin on the phone said, “HAHAHAHAHA Great joke” G said stupidly, “G I’m not one for jokes, In order to find the Key you must find the clues”“G what was that all about” the news reporter asked, “No comment” G said. Back in HQ the director moved this case up to E.P.F Rank. Then in the command room Agent Dot had a Breakthrough “G come here” Dot shouted “What is it dot” G said curiously, “When that call on your spy phone came through I was browsing round your files with the PC, Then I accidently pressed TRACK CALLER and didn’t realise” Dot said, “Do we know where the caller called from” G asked, “Yes the call came from the pizza parlour” Dot repliedAt the pizza parlour G asked the chef if anyone used the phone earlier that day, the chef said yes he even knew who the caller was, it was Pingu the penguin. G then went to her house arrested the two thieves and were later sentenced to 4 years in Penguin Prison. The key was then found by two penguins named Pitchy1098 & Vipansh. They were the rewarded with 1500 coins and Became an official member of the E.P.F!So what do you think??~Skyxxx7~ This story took 52 minutes to write | |
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pitchy1098
Number of posts : 731 Age : 27 Location : U.K., England, Bath Infractions : Adminity is insanity! VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-01-05
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Thu Apr 09, 2009 6:18 pm | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:10 am | |
| thanks what was you favourite part | |
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vipansh
Number of posts : 519 Age : 27 Location : New Delhi,India Infractions : HE..HE..HE..No infractions for me....M Admin!! VIP Points : Registration date : 2008-11-29
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:41 am | |
| Awesome story...Fabulous..I loved it!!
Thnxx for addin' mine and pit's name to it!! | |
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pitchy1098
Number of posts : 731 Age : 27 Location : U.K., England, Bath Infractions : Adminity is insanity! VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-01-05
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:01 am | |
| - skyxxx7 wrote:
- thanks what was you favourite part
Well the bit when we found the key! | |
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vipansh
Number of posts : 519 Age : 27 Location : New Delhi,India Infractions : HE..HE..HE..No infractions for me....M Admin!! VIP Points : Registration date : 2008-11-29
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:52 pm | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 6:10 pm | |
| YOUR WELCOME, I COUDNT COME UP WITH AN ENDING AND THATS THE BEST ONE I HAD WRITTEN THERE IS 4 ALTERNATIVE ENDINGS!!! | |
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pitchy1098
Number of posts : 731 Age : 27 Location : U.K., England, Bath Infractions : Adminity is insanity! VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-01-05
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:23 pm | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:36 pm | |
| Alternate endings:- 1. A penguin finds the key but when he takes it off CP blows up (NO MORE CP) 2. A penguin finds the key (BORING) 3. Never found (NO ANNIVERSERY PARTY) 4. I find it (SELFISH)
ENDING:- 1. Vipansh & Pitchy1098 find it and get reward (NOT SELFISH, MORE CP, THE ANNIVERSERY PARTY WILL HAPPEN, NOT BORING)
If not the ending which one would you have picked
~Skyxxx7~ | |
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vipansh
Number of posts : 519 Age : 27 Location : New Delhi,India Infractions : HE..HE..HE..No infractions for me....M Admin!! VIP Points : Registration date : 2008-11-29
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:37 am | |
| if not the current one....I would pick the 1st one!!! | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sat Apr 11, 2009 12:32 pm | |
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vipansh
Number of posts : 519 Age : 27 Location : New Delhi,India Infractions : HE..HE..HE..No infractions for me....M Admin!! VIP Points : Registration date : 2008-11-29
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sat Apr 11, 2009 2:21 pm | |
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pitchy1098
Number of posts : 731 Age : 27 Location : U.K., England, Bath Infractions : Adminity is insanity! VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-01-05
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:47 pm | |
| nah i would pik the fourth if not the current one! | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sun Apr 12, 2009 12:15 am | |
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pitchy1098
Number of posts : 731 Age : 27 Location : U.K., England, Bath Infractions : Adminity is insanity! VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-01-05
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sun Apr 12, 2009 12:26 am | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:39 am | |
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jjkanes Great Surfer
Number of posts : 236 Location : somewhere chillin out VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-13
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:48 pm | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:49 pm | |
| thanks jj and keep being active!!! | |
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jjkanes Great Surfer
Number of posts : 236 Location : somewhere chillin out VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-13
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:53 pm | |
| im always active i love postin on forums! | |
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skyxxx7 Great Surfer
Number of posts : 201 Age : 28 Location : UK, Wales,north powys, llansantffraid-ym-mechain Infractions : 0 VIP Points : Registration date : 2009-04-02
| Subject: Re: The case of the Stolen Key part 2 of 2 By Skyxxx7 Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:55 pm | |
| Thats Great for the forums owners!!! | |
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